Chapter 16 - alternate chapter

Note: Although I indicated in the book that I had originally wrote a different chapter with a more "edgy" ending, I've decided not to post it. After reviewing some of my sources, I decided that some of my points were based on faulty information. I'd like to post this alternate chapter because it made out to be a good story, but I don't want to be associated with presenting misleading information.

No need to worry about missing out, there's plenty more extra content:

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